Comments : Long Drawn

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    The last two lines make this poem, so true and such a huge message to everyone, those that desire it and those that take it for granted.

    This poem interested me, I like how the opening stanza draws you in.

    I have read it a few times now and to be honest, for the second time tonight I am stumped!!! (Poet on the piano the other)

    Great poem I just have no idea what the hell is going on.