Nice write! The rhyming is interesting but 3rd and 4th lines do not rhyme. I loved the story and topic. Well done.
BTW, Welcome back.

Good form, I love the hope of looking forward to that one day, it makes the moment all the sweeter almost vowing to wait. I have a few suggestions where I thought the flow was broken:

"Time simply passes us by
I hope it's you who I spend my life"
--- by & life don't rhyme, so if you're committing yourself to a rhyming scheme, keep the first two lines rhyming together and the last two. Also, the last line was a bit awkward. Usually the phrase goes "who I spend my life with". I think the "with" makes more sense there though we do know what you're talking about.

"I want to grow old with you I adore"
--- A pause after "you" or "with you who I adore"?

"From the beginning you hadn't a clue"
--- This is beautifully worded and shows a lot of innocence too!

"Though why can't you see that I also help too?
You will soon see that it's I who saved you"
--- this first line made me lost for a minute before I read the second....I'm not sure if I liked how it was "help", it seemed to mundane when you're discussing how your lover is a saviour and how you wish to do the same. Use a stronger word?

"We'll torture and maim everyone we can
Forever my love, we'll destroy this land"
--- Wow, I really like your different endings, it isn't cliche at all and takes an approach that didn't cross my mind. This makes me think that in this case you are not talking about being bound by love, but rather with this love, being able to be careless with no limitations. So your life together will be long, it will walk the earth many times. Interesting write!

Like everybody else said, first stanza is awkward. Loved the end, though, and the rest of the rhyming scheme is flawless. I would like to think that this is inspired by Fight Club

Now we're together, my glorious saviour
Keeping me safe, protecting from danger
Though why can't you see that I also help too?
You will soon see that it's I who saved you
^^^^ this part just took my breathe away the love that is shown here is BEAUTIFUL beyond words very beautiful good job 5/5

Queen Ashlin

I like the poem I would have worded I hope it's you who I spend my life"
I hope it's with you I spend my life"
for a nice half rhyme or you could change it to
Time passes us by in simple ways
I hope it's with you I spend my days"

still a 5>>>>

Good rhyming poem although the last two lines seem somewhat out of character with the poem as I see !

This is such a sweet and sad poem all at once..many different kinds of emotins in this piece and i like it a bunch 5/5

First stanza: I like the flow of the first two lines of this stanza, it's really nice, but then the other two lines seem... awkward. The last line seems unfinished and doesn't continue with the rhyme scheme.

Second stanza: I think some punctuation should be added here to show the reader where to pause.

Example:

"I want to grow old with you, I adore
treasuring moments we've shared before.
For years I'd (maybe should be changed to I've...I'd is past tense, I've would be present.) been yearning, waiting for you from the beginning, you hadn't a clue."

A good trick to use when writing poetry, is read it aloud... and whenever you pause when you read it, use a comma or if you want to start a new sentence, use a period or even a semicolon if it's just an addition to the same thought. Just a suggestion, though. I know some people don't like adding a lot of punctuation to their poetry, I just think it helps the reader.

Third stanza: I really like this stanza...talking about how they have kept you safe and vice versa, but they haven't really seen the light yet that you are the one who has saved them.

Ending: Nicely put ending... very different than what I was expecting.

Overall a nice write!

Wonderfully penned!

I love the rhyme here. Nicely done! Also the loyalty you depict is beautiful and lovely.

Keep penning:)

I think this poem needs a bit of tweaking just to make it sound smoother, but overall I found the content sweet and I have missed reading poems like this one.

Thanks for sharing.

Once again you express your feelings well . I think a lot of people feel the same way. Wishing so bad to be with someone . I really like the first paragraph . It creates a cute image :)

Wow! loved this one!
you were able to put in so many different kinds of feelings in to your work.

The rhyming was well done also, the flow was good!
i don't see any wrong in it. good work

A nice poem. Well written.