Comments : Wings & Roots

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Larry you took me to your porch... What a peaceful and insightful poem.. the descriptive words used to describe your actions.. sounds you hear and the bonding moment as if to say you are joining the company of your cat... Oh to be a cat, lounging and basking in the sun... peaceful and tranquil... love this!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meme

    I love the ease and serenity of this piece. It gave me such a feeling of calmness, and you really did a great job in taking the reader to where you are exactly. The description of the place and the noises surrounding you and how the weather felt made it so easy to the reader to be there. I just love days like this where you just lay down and enjoy nothing but the mundane things. Loved it!