Proudly woman

by Yatubeera Resty   Mar 8, 2013


The measure of my existance
None can imagine
Am the shadow in every being
The reason of life existance
For it all starts with me

A creature with abilities, am
With a heart that cares
Sacrificial at every point
Capable of protecting
Selflessly i bear all battles
Even when am no worrier

Gentle is my touch
A mold of preparation
Teaching in all aspects
For am the initiator of love

Yet, sad is my destiny
Defined only as i live it
Nothing is certain
For my path lays in another's
Wo-man am called
A lover, wife and mother.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    It's not easy been a woman yet at the same time we have to be proud for the abilities and tasks we accomplish! I liked this write.

    The measure of my existance
    None can imagine
    Am the shadow in every being
    The reason of life existance
    For it all starts with me

    ^^A nice introduction for a woman. Women are like a shadow and the very life begins with them too...the giver, the nurturer. Just one thing the word existance, a little typo existence.

    A creature with abilities, am
    With a heart that cares
    Sacrificial at every point
    Capable of protecting
    Selflessly i bear all battles
    Even when am no worrier

    ^^This stanza clearly shows the strength of a woman at very stage of her life. She may not be cut out for this job but she does it and excels in it for each stage is a battle. Liked this stanza. The last line did you mean 'warrior'?

    Yet, sad is my destiny
    Defined only as i live it
    Nothing is certain
    For my path lays in another's
    Wo-man am called
    A lover, wife and mother.

    ^^An interesting ending and I like how you have separated the word woman because that too shows there is a masculine force even within our label wo-man! This ending makes me feel the down part of it all. Even though we do and accomplish we are still under the thumb of a man! I can really feel the sighs of the writer here..a good read :)

    • 4 years ago

      by Yatubeera Resty

      Am happy u appreciate but more happier you appreciate woman hood.

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