I see you. (amended)

by Pete Daniels   Mar 14, 2013


You showed me your heart,
You showed me your whole,
You opened it all,
You laid bare your soul.

You were so down low,
Much burden to bear,
You gave me a chance,
Your load to share.

I gathered you up,
Picked you off the floor,
Stood you up tall,
You walked once more.

I now see you walk,
So tall and so proud,
I see you from afar,
Flying free from the crowd.

A bursting true heart,
Is now what I give,
I long for the day,
I now see you live.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Frumuasa Jessica

    Great job,
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    Sounds like it came straight from ur heart(:
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