Comments : Let's Start As Friends

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Great poem, I really liked the words you put into this, wonderful poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The little I've known about you
    From what I've read about You,
    Has whet my appetite so much
    That I would love to know you more.

    Let's disregard the stranger stage,
    Skipping past the acquaintance stage
    As I get familiar with you, vice-a-vis,
    ^^
    vis-a-vis
    And we can start off as friends.

    I don't want to start an argument,
    Let's just enjoy a grand dialogue
    And see where it would lead us;
    Let's start off easy; just as friends.

    ^^
    I like what you are saying here, Kips. To make clear you want to really get to know her, instead of going for something cheap and meaningless..will really give you a warm place in her heart!

    Should we talk about your goals,
    Dreams, ethics or personal beliefs?
    Just tell me what you want it to be,
    To start on our way to becoming friends.

    ^^
    What you say here is that you are interested in hearing her talk, instead of you telling her what you are about. Great, good qualities.

    I am beginning to understand why you are such a popular guy!

    Well done, enoyed this read very much:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Great Write!!!