Comments : Mine Allegiance

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    I totally agree this poem is very sweet and unique. Your poem make me feel like I am back in the day of the old testament. The times when men wore the long beards and white wigs. This poem is romantic and wrote and a manner where the readers could connect.

    Favorite stanzas...

    Serenity, the wish of mine soul
    Toward thee, and that ample grace
    Be bestowed upon thee forever.
    This petitioned I for thee every day.

    Just beautiful...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite Kips!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Milo De Moray

    Hey Kips! I like your style, in fact I prefer it myself. I love this stanza;

    Why shouldst thou toil or famish
    While others dine and flourish?
    I wouldst trade mine gladness
    For every one of thy sorrows.

    It shows real love, the way its meant to be,yet so few of us ever realize it, and, therefore miss it completely. Keep up the good work friend.