WOW, I lvoe this poem so much, it really speaks out ot people, I love the words you choice and the flow your writing has, it is perfect, wonderful job, 100/100

Delicate angels roam throughout the land
Taunting and mocking her pain
Laughing and calling from beyond the grave
Leaving her unwilling to stand.

^^^ that part was my favorite! :) 5/5

Queen Ashlin