Writing as it comes to you for me is the best way to write. Good job

Wow, that was so powerful, it blew me away!!! It sucks to me, wodnerful job with your emotions and feelings, such force from your heart!!! This is soooooo BEAUTIFUL and sad and heartfelt!!! Two thumbs up 100/100 and I want you to know if you need anyone to talk to, I'm always here, and I'd be happy to help and listen!!!

Perfect poem. Your genuine longing is the soul of your poem.