Comments : Be Yourself (string of hay(na)ku)

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    WOW, wonderful poem, I nomianted it for the weekly poetry contest, hope you win, 100/100!

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I really like this piece. For being so simple and short it really does its job. You are unique too or else you'd never have written such perfection :p good job nice write.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful, lovely how this was formatted and very true message inside.

    Well done!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    Believing in yourself does create true hope I agree. Because you can't expect anyone to love you without loving yourself. I do love the message here though. It is so very simple yet so strong as it stands on its own. Loving yourself does make your heart grow stronger no matter what anyone says. You have to be positive no matter what and I know for a fact that its hard. When you have been hurt all your life its hard but all you can do is keep smiling. Never let anyone get you down no matter what they say. Again all you can do is be yourself and people will like you. Sometimes it is hard to know who to trust though. We are truly all unique inside. This poem is very beautiful as it shows what you should do in life. Be yourself and don't let people bring you down no matter what! Love often :) 5/5