Comments : The next few hours

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel

    This poem better nto be true I need you right now girl I really really need you right now you cant leave me

  • 10 years ago

    by Someone Invisible

    So deep and so matter of fact...don't let this be true...advise from a stranger it'll get better put just keep pullin' through...maybe not tomorrow or the next but one day some day just make sure you're still here "As the sun with create another dawn." please listen to the advise I'm not sure I can follow....

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wonderful poem, I relaly loved it, fantastic job, but soooooo sad!!!!!! I'M HERE FOR YOU, WE ALL LOVE YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!

  • 10 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    OH MY GOSH this one tells a sad but beautiful story!!! wow i'm blown away I LOVE this ONE 5/5

    your mommy

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is soooooo beautiful, please never sotp writing, you are sooooo talented!! sorry but I had to read it again, it's that good :)