Life lines

by Biancas Veil   Apr 1, 2013


I started with strait lines,
But the thought it bought to mind did not fit,
My life is not a strait line,
The lines are crossed and overlapped,
So I change it I add more in and cross others out,
Still my masterpiece is just not finished,
One big line Straight through it all,
Thats it! I have finished,
My life ended with this line,
Now i am left to marvel at what I have done,
From my lines my blood will freely run.

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  • 11 years ago

    by mckenzie

    Good piece. got a little scared by the end :P

  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    Exceptionaly dark if im reading this right.forceful..i can feel(again its my interpretation)your aggitation which i greatly sympathize with.there's a"kick azz and taken names"feel about some of your writing which i like...attitude works for you and im gnna read more

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    Very sad and emotional piece. you spelled Straight wrong but otherwise very good 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Biancas Veil

      Thanks never been that good of a speller :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    Powerful piece!

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