Great piece of writing you ve got here

I like this very much. Like the use of Me Myself and I and since you credited the use of someone else's words as being part of your poem I don't think that there should be any problem with plagiarism. ( Although I could be wrong you would need to check the legalities to be sure). That aside I love to see unusual approaches to poetry. This is clearly musically inspired as I also feel a sense of rap to it too. Very enjoyable. Keep writing Milly x

Different, very well written with body and soul. Excellent

You've got great talent.

I like this poem a lot. I love how you used the “Me, Myself and I” in here. Makes this different from the way I usually write. But it is good and I like your style!

~Britt~

Where do I belong... great read

This has some wonderfully well phrased lines! Beautifully constructed! Regards Ink