The stowe away heart

by Mads Avnboeg   Apr 4, 2013


You left my bed
Left my head
Went out the door
Left the floor
Left me a sore
You took me sights
Took my rights
Took my heart
I tried to give it away
Nothing but An empty space
No heart to see
Just a mad
Old bumblebee
I hope you have
That old heart of mine
Stowed away
In some dusty spot
Please send it on
Cause mine is gone
And maybe
The receiver
Or holder has a heart
For me

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 11 years ago

    by Mads Avnboeg

    Thanks Cathy, As always glad to have some criticism good or bad, and I glad that you found something in my poem, that may have inspired you :-) And no I wont, and ditto to you ;-)

  • 11 years ago

    by Mads Avnboeg

    Thanks Cathy, As always glad to have some criticism good or bad, and I glad that you found something in my poem, that may have inspired you :-) And no I wont, and ditto to you ;-)

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this really spoke out to me, incredible job, I loved reading it, don't ever stop writing!

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Mads Avnboeg