I love the long lines, they have so much meaning. Great job at this poem, unbelievable job, I LOVE READING IT, WONDERFUL JOB, it relaly sucked me in and suck out my emotion, LOVED IT!!!!!

This left me speechless. Great poem! 5/5.

Its brilliant poem.....i really love this....u will defenitely become a great poet one day. This poem is heart touchable. GReat. well job done eve