Oh my goodness this is soooo sweet, she is a very lucky girl, I hope she knows that, this is soooo touching and would win any girl's heart, wonderful poem, fasntastic, outstanding!!!

This is just... I dont even know the right words for this! Amazing job, I agree with her ^^^ this really would win any girl's heart with the first two lines. I love this so much, she really is lucky. 5/5 from me :)

You have a good command of words at an early stage, very descriptive. Everyone knows when they feel like that about someone. Its better when you put it down into words. Good job.

Aww . this is so beautiful! A beautiful expression of love :)

Excellent writing and love the form its written in!
Well Done