This was a fantastic poem!!! It's an unusual format for you but the change worked really well here. Plus the definition of love was very accurate of what it should be

Wow, this is truly an inspirational poem, it really speaks out to anyone who has ever felt love, thoght they had or wishes to. OMGoodness this poem is overflowing with beauty and the sound of the heart. Two thumbs up 100/100!

EXACTLY what love is and should be! :)

Well penned Robert.

I couldnt have said it better myself.