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by nichol   Apr 16, 2013


Let's restart.
We've grown apart.
I have a new heart,
that's half apart.

I missed you when I was gone.
My life was like a tragic song.
I wish you were here with me.
And things better than they use to be.

We were always meant to fly,
but yet we're apart and wonder why.
So let's stop with all the "what-ifs"
and give each other the perfect gift.

So lets just start a life all new.
And take on the world, just me an you.

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Last sentence of the last stanza should be "and" instead of "an" besides that I still can't stand that it has a bunch of periods when you should be putting commas or making a new stanza but that's my weakness anyways it's very adorable I like the rhyming but try making a poem that doesn't rhyme and I would love to see it keep writing hun! 5/5

    -Mori

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Magnificent poem, I really enjoyed reading it, excellent poem!!!! 100/100

    • 10 years ago

      by nichol

      Thank you! (:

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