Resiled Happiness

by Meme   Apr 17, 2013


Each drop was competing
in a perfect choreography;
and there I was, just like a
kid with opened palms trying
to catch each and every
one of them.

I stood there with closed
eyes and I just listened to the
melodic sounds of every beat
as the sky prospered, sending all
those blessings upon the trees.

And I kept reminding myself to..

Breathe-
because its possible to resurrect
every shattered feeling.

Breathe-
and sway your thoughts with
movements of droplets upon
your skin.

Breathe-
because with every breath
life is reborn within your soul.

Breathe-
and remember you are a part
of natures orchestra simply
when you breathe.

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© Copyright 2013 by: gIrL
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**For a club contest**

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  • 4 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Loved the way the last few stanzas had the feel of taking an actual breath! You really captured the ebb and flow of it. Beautiful!

  • 4 years ago

    by Yatubeera Resty

    Simply put yet so relaxing....
    You remind me of a friend's words, " with every breath, you can be anytig you will"
    Love ending lines, " ...a part of nature orchestra...."

  • 4 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow I love this poem... the opening stanza was my favorite part. It was so original. I love the idea of trying to catch raindrops. It was beautiful. I love the repetition of 'breathe' it really emphasized the positivity you were trying to portray.

    Amazingggg poem <333

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Meme- This piece truly gave me goosebumps, really adore the format of elegant repetative tone of the word "breathe"- What I like about it so much is, it made me feel as I read it of rain actually falling down on my face... it was calming... beautiful poem!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Karla

    The ending is perfect. Lovely piece, Meme!

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks Karla :)