First off, I adore the title, I think the poem is has nice flow and wonderful structure and a great poem!

Wow, this is a seriously deep piece.
I really don't even know what to say about this, exactly. Just wow. I think you describe what a lot of people feel or think about.

Great choice of words, lovely.

Life indeed is precious...so don't ever let ur misery swallow it! :) nice poem, Nat...! :) u've got the talent...!

Life indeed is precious...so don't ever let ur misery swallow it! :) nice poem, Nat...! :) u've got the talent...!