Swimming In The Deep Oceans of Secrets

by CathyButterflyJC   Apr 21, 2013


(orginal title)
The Deep

Beautiful seas
Wait to meet me
Take a trip
If only I could hold my breath
Long enough to walk from here to there on the ocean floor
To run my whole body through the waters
Reach my fingers to the surface
I wiggle my fingers making a joyful sensation shelter them
Conquering my fear
The calmness it gifts me with
I run my fingers along it
Feel the sooth of the waves

But now I tip my toes into it
In a dream
The gentleness it accomplishes
The peace it spreads to all corners of the earth
Reaching to every part of this world
Feel it's tender temperature along my skin
And shiver at the cold with a smile
Laying its beauty to all who open their eyes to see
Its embrace can do no harm to me from here
The soothing feeling of the waters engulfs my toes to my whole body
Setting my soul free in its rowing nature
Where there's no closed doors limiting my heart

I lay my whole body down in it's subsiding waves
The water elapses my entire body bringing it to peace
How it overcomes me
Like a sea creature I feel safe and at peace a lost treasure an undiscovered palace in my reach
Its dear control over me Covering my entire body
Cocooning me in a new life
Coffining my body in delight
Surrounding my body and strangling what could destroy me As I blow bubbles
Awakening a different side of me
Bringing to me a refreshment and keenness of my senses
Clearing my mind Canceling my history
The soothing sea, It's so beautiful
Thee End

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  • 10 years ago

    by dalllllal

    Your way if writing here is amazing I enjoyed this from beginning to end keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    Simply cute...

  • 10 years ago

    by Treehugger

    This is the best poem from you that I have read. The only thing I didn't like was the words 'thee end' at the very end of it. it didn't flow with the rest of the poem. but its up to you to keep it there.

    I do love love this poem though, you speak beautifully on how the ocean can heal a person. your words speak so much truth. <3 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Kate

    I love it. So true and it paints a very light picture of the innocence and love the ocean holds. Nice job.