Comments : Loyalty

  • 10 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This gives me chills. I know that sometimes we can stray from God when we think that our ideas are better than his - which is always a stupid idea. That desperation that you captured to claw your way back to Jesus, and the cut-short feeling because he was already there was totally beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Britt

    You are truly gifted in the way you that you hit topics of something every Christian/spiritual person can relate to... this is definitely one of those moments. We may abandon Him, but He never abandons us.. and when we realize that, it's almost an "ah-ha" moment. I love the part about fitting Him into a box. It's hard to imagine just how BIG God is..

    I love the title, too. This is really just a beautiful poem!