This was beautifully sad, the imagery was very soft and melancholic, the wording smooth and free, nothing was restricted here...it felt almost relaxing, like the tone was just whispering, with the air around it...

Really lovely write here.

I think I remember reading this.

As always Noura, you have such an ability to move me, you're words are captivating

x

Exquisite Noura!!!

This will struck many writers close to home, fabulous writing, I can't wait to read more of your work, outstanding poem!

Beautiful flow to this poem. Another excellent write.