This was such an interesting poem, on one side it is filled with sorrow, longing, depression. Hinting at a troubled life and longing for a better world to belong in. But on the other hand it aims at society and how it an shape a person, and how they feel they must change themselves or hide themselves to be acceptable on the public eye.

The end held quite a dark am eerie tone.

I liked the rhyme throughout and the flow, I don't think I read many rhyming poems with such a dark tone it them.

Very realistic views and thoughts, but worded quite uniquely. Well done