Rember the pain

by kaylie   May 21, 2013


My hands cold,
my fingers trembling,
I thought our further would mold,
but instead I'm on the ground rembering,

my arms ach,
my leg bleeds,
a smile I fake,
I cant fill my needs,

my heart slowly cracks,
and screams,
for I cant have you back ,
only in my dreams,

you walked out with my heart,
and life,
I thought we would never be apart,
I thought I would be your wife,

I will never be the same,
this I know,
but please don't say my name,
for my death and pain will only grow

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  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I love how relatable this piece is. So many people read this and feel exactly what you're feeling. Great write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    I like your emotions especially in this line
    ^^I can't feel my needs.
    when u can't feel yourself means you can't feel the needs I think, this is wonderful.

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wonderful poem, outstanding job, I love how you wrote this, great description and emotion and feeling , two thumbs up!!

    • 10 years ago

      by kaylie

      Thank you so much

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Awwww I love it. It's dark but amazing. Very good job keep it up

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