Comments : Your Future...

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, I love the turn you took on this, fabulous job, I loved the kind of description you used, outstanding poem, two thumbs up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Well written! I like your rhymes :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Well written! I like your rhymes :)

  • 10 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wel written tori.
    A nice optimistic.
    From start to end, evry stanza have d lessons we need to learn.
    Bt Just abt one thing, i wont agree wid u.
    Life isnt a dangerous quest my friend.
    Life is beautiful..one jus needs wings to explore its beauty.

  • 10 years ago

    by William Mae

    Life is lived fuller by the warning signs placed by those who traveled it before you. A fantastic poem with caution as a premise but to never the less live life as its instruction. Beautiful write!