Comments : Inside the silken sheets

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I really love the opening, it sets off a very sensual scene...and the simile of the silk tickling her skin, that was unique because you wouldn't think that silk would tickle.

    Very nice write!! One little typo I found though, towards the end.

    "insid the silken sheets" ...forgot to add the 'e' to inside.

    • 10 years ago

      by zombiepikachu

      Thank you so much for your comment! And for catching the error! c:

    • 10 years ago

      by zombiepikachu

      Thank you so much for your comment! And for catching the error! c:

  • 10 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    You are a wonderful love poet. :). I love this poem as well. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very nice imagery and flow in this sensual poem

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Love it c:

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this poem. You are such an amazing poet! This was absolutely flawless

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this poem. You are such an amazing poet! This was absolutely flawless