I really enjoyed how you gave the wall life. especially when it comes to war or any kind of struggle.
the wall remains silent, just like it has for centuries...
probably my favorite line. the wall knows every secret imaginable but won't tell a soul. it feels and sees everything. from maybe men and women crying over lost loved ones, to intense fighting because of wars but it will never tell a soul. it has know emotion and chooses know sides. i loved it.
Wow! This is beautiful! Perhaps it is just because I absolutely love the word "breathe" I loved the line, "a subtle touch to it can breathe back the ambience of forgotten times,"
Beautifully written! Both of you! It doesn't seem like it is a collab -- it flows perfectly c:
I feel like you both brought life to walls -- embodying it wonderfully!