Oh my goodness this is sooooo beautiful, she is sure I lucky girl and I relaly hope she appreicates this song, it takes a special man to write a song for the women he loves, bravo!!!! 100/100, I think this is my favorite :)

This is suppose to be "A place full of magic" - Ooops....

Is there an edit poem function on here? (anyone?)

EDIT : Changed it now :)

Much much better than your first son I feel. I imagined the lyrics. The imagery is fantastic. This time I could see nothing wrong. The chours is much more free flowing this time. I can imagine this as a pop type song for sure. I wonder what the place of music is. But it leaves me guessing haha but 5/5. .