Comments : Shine, Shine Together (song)

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, that had a lot of very important things to say, remarkable work, outstanding song, almost jumped u and started to sing it, i really enjoyed reading it, never stop writing, outstanding lines, love them :)

    • 10 years ago

      by Tim

      Awww. That's Cathy. - I actually wrote this a while ago. But I wasn't here at the time.... I'm slowly trying to put old writings on here as I find them, and mix them in with current ones. :)

      Glad you enjoyed it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tim

    If anyone reads this....

    Could you tell me why there is "�" Randomly in the middle of it? where there are suppose to be spaces... :/

    And is there a way to get rid of them? It's really annoying.

    • 10 years ago

      by Tim

      Doesn't matter. Sorted it now :)

  • 10 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Ok no negative things but here is what I like. I love howyou let your voice shine with the flow of words. I loved the verses more than the chours though I guess that is my only nit pick. I guess I have high hopes for choruses though lol. But I found it a bit comical as you changed up the words at the end seeing your girls point of view. As you would do anything for her. Made me smile.. 5 for sure. You have a way with songs.