I actually really like this poem Tim. It has a very deep message within. Sometimes we all struggle within. And we all can be reborn. We all struggle with bad or good. I loved the first stanza because it is the message of it and the ending is perfect because it says we all can be reborn 5/5

Wow, I think this is one of my favorite poems of yours, so powerful and has so much lines that stick to a person, outstanding poem, bravo!!! Two thumbs up

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Love it, it represents you in the most unusual way, my only critique is that one or 2 of the words are used out of context and may need to be replaced with more appropriate words, but other than that, a wonderfully unusual poem.