I like this poem Tim I can imagine how it sounds in my head and I bet it sounds wonderful. We are all searching for that someone. That someone we want to call ours. As I am. Another great poem mate... your love poems are wonderful. 5

Just to add.. I just listened to it and it is wonderful. It sounds like it did in my head. Please listen to it!! Tim has a great voice :)

Well... To be honest... I don't know what to say. I was smiling the whole time and my mom is looking at me like I am some weirdo but I like it.

I like the poem element and the rhyme and it works well as a song. Because it is a song but you know what I mean.

Some of it doesn't match up but it happens. It works well both ways.

And your accent... I just.... Yeah :) haha

I like it. Nicely done.

Wow this is so intense, I loved this so much, outstanding wonderful!!! Fantastic writing, I adore soooo much!! 100/100

Wow this is so intense, I loved this so much, outstanding wonderful!!! Fantastic writing, I adore soooo much!! 100/100

For you are the only girl I've loved.
And you're the only one I want to hug.
^^^hugs with our loved one and only, I think this is only the true love.
what a great written.
love this a lot..

Aww, tears formed in my eyes. Beautiful piece. I loved it.

That was good. one question though. did you mean to misspell scared? other than that great job.