To the one who might love me

Judging comment:

"Love the opening here, so brutal, blunt and just right in your face oncee you get to "Don't do it." It makes me think the author never wishes to be saved, no matter the circumstances and if it is needed or not, which is further heigtened and confirmed once I get to the next line.

"full of legends and lunatics."
This made me smile-I know it wasn't meant to but I can't help but sense wry sarcasm here and matching with my dry humor it did slightly amuse me.
Absolutely adore the mention of fairytales and dragons and that whole verse. The imagery is beautifully crafted and it makes me think on movies and books such as lord of the rings or the Inheritance cycle, which are both favourites of mine.
"for I am not from your world. "
Hands down, one of my favourite closings of a poem. Again so stark and in your face. Perhaps, the author is referencing love in the second half of the poem, the fact she believes it would be bad to give in and fall for someone, is what I took from this part especially within the last line.

I found this refreshing. It was something different, unique, carefully thought out and a poem I thoroughly enjoyed."

Judging comment:
This poem is so blunt, in your face yet very vulnerable. I love the beginning how it definitely sets the tone -- it reminded me of the movies where someone says not to fall in love with the other, and yet they always do. You know you're in "another world" as the author put it, and you know you're not in the right frame of mind. It's interesting to see the push back, as normally you see poetry about the other side, trying to love someone when they won't let you. The walls put up here are crafted in a really strange, poetic and beautiful way. The Huntress hits her stride by the end of the poem, ending it with an emotional bang. This really has a bit of everything I feel poetry is supposed to be about. Amazing. Also -- love the title. Catchy and to the point.

This is just absolutely incredible. So well written and nicely put. Love it.

Lovely art you giving out, I love it

If you ever considered
pulling me away from a car crash
or donating your heart to me ...

Don't do it.

^^ AWESOME opening, straight forward, in your face, tell it like it is....thats how I write and thats how I like my poetry

But legends don't carry handkerchiefs,

^ excellent line!

I only have a brief time to read and comment, but this was just amazing. Loved your metaphors and the blunt tone this poem carries. Really caught my attention and made me relate on personal levels.

Well done!