Wow,. incredible poem, so much emotion and truth, I loved it!!! Two thumbs up, I especially liked the second last verse and I like how you poured out your emotion and put in lines said, outstanding poem!!

Wow. I love this poem as it is a sad story of something that could be true. I love your memories as they could be happy. The poem itself is amazing though the flow and rhyming were flawless. 5/5