Comments : Artistry

  • 4 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Beautiful..and specialy d end..

  • 4 years ago

    by TSI25

    This is probably one of my favorites from you; the sense of metaphor is amazing. The emotions are intense yet eloquent. It even seems to tell a kind of story that begs reading into. Well done

  • 4 years ago

    by Madison

    A truly amazing piece, the human relationship is truly a work of art

  • 4 years ago

    by Doug Roossien

    Very well a real sense of being there and wondering what was going to happen...drew me right in to the environemnt ...very well done

  • 4 years ago

    by DarkLight

    That's totally accepted.. amazing actually the best in mind. good art

  • 4 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Great job here enjoyed it :)

  • 3 years ago

    by ryan woollard

    I think that's just simply fantastic I love every part of it 5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Your love for this person, it's so incredible, it's as though you see this person as an angel, perfect, incorruptible, heavenly, but then you bring it down to earth and remind us that angels can fall"sonetimes slowly, preventing mistakes too dark to erase" the paradox of immortal humanity is such a beautiful contrast.your work is truly ethereal, magical.I love it

  • 3 years ago

    by Mermaids Lullaby

    Wow! This is a very unique writing with deep meaning and imagery. Each line flows into the next with perfect suspense.

  • 3 years ago

    by PineappleKing

    I love this piece, it shows the love and dedication to ones friend/brother figure and trying to uplift them. To show them true beauty in it all and to show that (you) will be there for them no matter what.

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hmmmn I love this....artist sometimes became the critic of other artists...but in this poem, I see the good flow of lifting each other... I like it..