This is so pretty...i can feel the love in this poem...great job...5/5

My favorite lines " Passion upon your pupil And rose peddles amongst the white" beautiful piece girly.

You have a lot of skill to writing about love.
once again nicely penned..I love it

I feel suffocated. I can't breathe. No I'm only kidding (then again!) It is very clear you have a passionate soul and some lucky guy is going to be, if not already, the beneficiary of that big heart. Just don't let him read this or you'll scare the be-jesus out of him. I, on the other hand, sitting at a safe distance, highly secured, can appreciate this for the lovely piece it is.