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  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I love how you portray the sadness with woe. Its a strong word to use and I can imagine the words as tears flowing down. I see a girl with her head in her hands . The future is a hard thing to plan. You love this person but he doesn't love you back. This is obvious but maybe this is goodbye break up. You dont want to leave and I love the way you describe the time. As you reach for anything to spend more time with this person. I love the way you portray this whole poem though. You don't want to go but you have to. And you don't trust this guy because he might have hurt you before so your heart is fragile. You wonder if you should worry at all or just move on just like he might. That is just my thinking. Maybe I am off. I love it 5/5 and nominated