Comments : Torn

  • 10 years ago

    by dindee

    Hi there...

    sad one..

    dont do anything that causes harm to yourself..
    TIME HEALS all the wounds...

    at times you might felt you were lost...but just stay at the right track...and in time you will be whole again..

    =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Erick Neal

    Its like they say "you cant help who you fall in love with." Even if they may not feel the same, you just have to accept it. No matter what happens you need to stay strong. When you get knocked off your feet, remember that crawling is still moving. It will take time but you will find a way past it.

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    The ending is amazing....

    If I lose him will I kill myself?
    If I do what would everyone else feel?
    Will I continue to die inside?
    Or will I eventually heal?

    Nice poem

  • 7 years ago

    by Alex Penuelas

    Loving it

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I've always clung to the hope that there is always a way. It's the words I've lived by.

    I truly hope you find yours.

    Dips head in respect

    Craig

    • 7 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      That's a good thing to go by.
      I've come a long way since I wrote this poem. Somewhat makes me proud of myself.
      Thank you