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  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I lovedddd this poem. This tells such a story of heartache and love. I love how you started this out and you fell it seems in love with this person. I love the imagery you provide. It adds to the poem so very well. I love how you say you made a connection to this person too. I also like the time laspe as well. 7 months is a long time to have someone in your life. I like how you tell the whole story too. Then it all falls apart. Love and even friends are a difficult thing to keep. Sometimes we all need to get away from everything. I agree with you there. Starting over gives us a chance to find oourselves. I love the details of your downfall too. You turned to vodka and though it is very sad I understand whu. People turn to destructive things to numb their pain. I love how there is hope at the end here too. You have overcome again. This is a great write to show anyone can overcome. Xx

  • 10 years ago

    by stacy

    Title for the poem : 'At last'