This is a nice read. I like how it flows and the romance.
4 years ago
The imagery here is something that really 'made' this poem. A sweet poem about two lovers actually falling in love -- beautiful descriptions here. I laughed, though, as I read the cookie-cutter pancakes and then 'pinned' .. because I just saw this on Pinterest. No idea if theres a connection lol. Anyway -- this poem was gorgeous and I love how the ending wrapped up with falling out of lust and into love. That moment is truly a sweet one!
5 years ago
by Jibreel de Leon
Loved this one Hannah. I shall pour over your collection. Your words strike deeply and create a clear conceptual. Congrats !!!