Comments : Look Behind His Walls

  • 3 years ago

    by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

    I absolutley loved this piece. So many lies and deceit so it is extremely difficult and takes years for anyone to be let in to his heart. One slip up and you are back to square one. he says he doesnt care but in reality we all do, but behind his walls, behind the armor that he has built around his heart he's crying. 5/5 great poem MKDTA

    • 2 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      I'm sorry i never saw this comment. thank you so much :)) I'm glad there are people who understand what im trying to say and can relate.

  • 3 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This poem reminds me so much of my bro. He has the whole facade going on but no one can really see past it until you learn to really understand him and be patient.i love this poem.

    • 3 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      I'm glad you were able to apply this to something personal. Thank you.