~Magnificent lines:

Water spits clarity
to humans fishing for truths
in rivers of lies

Riverbanks embrace with fear
Water's rapid currents of ire
as near by Oaks watch diligently
their leaves fall like hairs

I like your use of words and imagination.
Awesome work!

Hmmm this is a very interesting poem. I loved the metaphor of the current in the water. This does have a lot of imagination I agree. I think the water is life and we are all struggling against it. We all want to seek truth in our life no matter what it is. People lie and that is something we cannot change but we can be as honest with ourselves no matter what. Again this is a great poem because of the wording. Again I loved the metaphor for life. Well done