Comments : Temporary Home

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Every time I read a nature poem it makes my heart flutter because people can make them such full of imagery. This one did not disappoint me at all. Here I can feel nature all around me and I can feel peace within this. I see this at night on a cold and rainy time with the use of moon and the owl. I also loved how youbuild up fto it. You make the owl a main character but you don't really know it until the end. It's sad though I think that the owl has to find a new home but sometimes you have to change. I also love how you gave nature a voice with each line you write. Beautiful overall. :) well done to you!

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This is a great poem awesome job 5/5 :-)