I am a huge fan of your senryus!! You have the gift to pack a punch in this short form of writing and it thrills me, everytime I see a senryu by you!

The word usage in this poem is mouth watering!! I really like the word tantric... its a fun!!

This piece reminds me of a philosophical discussion with a growth in knowledge, which is really a fun thing! I like blossoming at the end... it is prefect for the ending.... awesome piece here!!