Love it.

I love this as well. You go into so much depth with such a simple thing. The imagery again is very vivid and I loved the rhyming personally. You have a lot of talent and I hope you keep writing. :)

Thats a great write gwen davis . you very aptly talk about the current day situation . actually its not current its been there through the ages . from bible times . and the bible talks about it too . people who appear all good but may not be really as good as they portray themselves to be . nice write . very well written !!! :)