Comments : Missing You (song)

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Love this poem.

    Nice very nice. I can understand what u feel.

    • 10 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks, very much appreciated :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Maher,

    If you keep winning our club competitions, I am going to run out of pieces to comment on of yours!
    As to the write, I see by your footnote that this was written when you were fourteen! That's incredible. There's a clear talent for lyric here already and I can almost imagine a guitar being strummed along to it.

    So when I go, don't you cry,
    I'm only on the other side of the world
    missing you,

    ^^

    Excellent line.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Lol thank you Ben, but you've misunderstood, good Sir! I met the girl when I was fourteen, but I wrote this song about 3yrs ago when I went to see her in person, so I can't take your full compliment there. In regard to winning the club competitions, they must have been flukes, my friend. I just got lucky is all :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Another lovely song Maher you are a genius....

    So when I go, don't you cry,
    I'm only on the other side of the world
    missing you,
    wishing you were here with me.
    But if we never get to meet again,
    could I get you to do one thing, if you can?
    Please, don't forget me.
    Remember who I am.

    Great job

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Gel, glad you like it. It sounds much better than the lyrics are :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lol, Maher... lucky I expressed my surprise at it then rather than wrote 'shows real potential'! :)