Comments : The Fence

  • 10 years ago

    by Aaron

    It's good, just needs some cleaning up with grammar and spelling.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Po whet

    Lovely write though I couldn't grasp the depth of it all as to my wish so I'll read more of it again.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Po whet

    Lovely write though I couldn't grasp the depth of it all as to my wish so I'll read more of it again.

    • 10 years ago

      by Joseph Boadi

      Thanx fr checking it out,but its meaning is quite deeper,the poem is about satisfying a want and a need,obviously we prefer to satisfy our wants because its adhoc and pressing but at the long run its the needs that are more important and long term solves the problem,The persona clearly undastnds but the desire to address a want is more calling,he places his bets on satisfying a want and he realizes it was more prudent attempting to satisfy his needs.This piece is only trying to draw to our notice a difference that lies between a want/need.thank u