You Are my Light

by Everlasting   Jan 12, 2014


The moonlight highlights the spotlight
of your sight with such delight
even more than the lighting of a lighthouse
after the twilight night.

The Starlight becomes the back-lights
lightening the path of your sight
when there is no daylight.

and you, you en-light not slightly
but entirely every path of my life
specially during the darkest of nights

or when the streets have no lights

you are the torchlight
the flashlight
the candle-lights
and even the fire-lights

that alight on my sight with such delight.

you are the light
that blights
the night

you are the light
that guides me
through the eventide.

You are in me
You are with me
you are my life

oh Jesus Christ.

and also my God.

You are my light!

Written by: Lucero L.

2012-11-09

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  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh woww, what a poem...I love the way you rhymed it. You excelled my dear friend. The way you used the '-ights' is marvellous. While reading the poem the only thing I kept saying was..." she is too good with words." From the very first line you had me glued to your poem and I was reading there, waiting how creative are you going to get. And till the time I reached the end, oh wow...you left me speechless. I have always loved rhyming but this, this is better...This is the best. I have never read anything as good as this ever before.

    And I especially loved this paragraph:

    The Starlight becomes the back-lights
    lightening the path of your sight
    when there is no daylight.

    Way to go, Lucy. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Good poem 5\5 :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Clinton Hills

    Great poem 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    ~Breathtaking! It's like a song. GREAT work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An inspiring read and I also like the internal rhymes you have used to make this not only lively but also like a song one can sing for God!

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