Well written, and very inspiring

This is another great poem Lucero. I enjoyed the simplistic style of your wording. There is so much love here and I can tell the character really loves their religion. Jesus is a great light in the life of Christian person. This really is inspiring because it is filled with a lot of hope and love. Great write altogether :)

Thats is so sweet n enlightenin like light when there is no lights.

God is always with you even in your darkest moments. God is never early, never late, God is always on time. He feels our pain, see our tears and he sends us signs, winks or messages, we often tend to ignore. If only all of us put our trust and faith in God, the world would be a better place.
Excellent write Luce

An inspiring read and I also like the internal rhymes you have used to make this not only lively but also like a song one can sing for God!

~Breathtaking! It's like a song. GREAT work!

Great poem 5/5

Good poem 5\5 :)

Oh woww, what a poem...I love the way you rhymed it. You excelled my dear friend. The way you used the '-ights' is marvellous. While reading the poem the only thing I kept saying was..." she is too good with words." From the very first line you had me glued to your poem and I was reading there, waiting how creative are you going to get. And till the time I reached the end, oh wow...you left me speechless. I have always loved rhyming but this, this is better...This is the best. I have never read anything as good as this ever before.

And I especially loved this paragraph:

The Starlight becomes the back-lights
lightening the path of your sight
when there is no daylight.

Way to go, Lucy. :)