Comments : Someone Understands, Jump Into Life Part 1 (monthly)
4 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
This is a very beautiful poem hon. The only thing I will keep harping on is the length. Though the message is very strong altogether here you could have said what you said in a fewer words. Anyway the poem itself is great. This character is such a kind hearted person. And I can tell you made their personality shine through everything. No matter what they will be a friend to everyone who is hurt. This might be based on reality and this person is amazing if it is. :). I think nowadays it's hard to stand up for anything without feeling judged or getting hurt. Overall this is a great poem because of the message alone. Well done.
This is a great poem bringing good points across. It is in a human nature to judge instead of getting to know you. People often tend to tell you what to do and how to feel. They can't understand because they have not walked in the same shoe. All what it takes is one good strong person by your side that supports you and provide strength to overcome everything. Important is you know who you are, where you come from and where you are going. Keep writing